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to Your Visitors The First Time They Visit



Melissa Ingold

From: Melissa Ingold
Date:

Subject: Get Them to Buy...without the Hype


Dear Fellow Online Business Owner,

Whether you've been online for one month or 10 years, the words on your website are the one crucial element which can make or break your business.

That important element is communication.

Think about it for a minute, offline sales people train hard and work for years to improve and tweak their communication skills. They take training courses, attend seminars, and practice, practice, practice. They also have an advantage to selling that we online business owners don't have. They use their body language and gestures to gain your full attention and can speak directly to you.

don't know about you, but personally I'm too shy and not pushy enough to make it in the cut-throat offline sales industry. I started my online business to find an easier way to sell. I thought there must be a way to reach an unlimited number of people without having to cold call or hunt leads down.

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And thankfully I was right. Online customers will come to YOU. Forget harassing people who really don't want to speak to you. Imagine people coming to you to learn more about YOUR products. Customers who are...

  • Eager to hear about you, your services, your business and all you have to offer.

  • Excited to see your next product launch and are ready to buy.

  • Willing to give you their email address so you can give your product recommendations.

  • Happy to give you repeat business and unexpected praise and feedback.

There's just one problem, if your website isn't communicating effectively with your visitor - you lose a potential subscriber or worse yet, a potential customer. You aren't there to personally greet your website visitors, so your website MUST communicate effectively.

Using the right words on your web page - also known as copywriting - can help you get more subscribers and customers. And you can do this, all without resorting to hype or other unsavory tactics rampant on the web.

For example...

Killer Copy Lady!

What About This "Killer Copy" That Lets You Sell Anything To Anyone?


We Say: There's No Need To Resort To Murder Just To Get Your Visitors To Click The Order Button!

In reading about copywriting, you may have learned about something called, "Killer Copy". The idea behind killer copy is that you can sell anything to anyone. You know, the old saying about being able to "sell ice to an eskimo"?

Sorry, I'm not much into being a "killer" with my copy or selling things to people that they don't need. I'd rather educate my customers to help them make the best purchasing decisions. If my products are not what they need, I don't want them to buy it. PERIOD. If my products are crap (and they're not, of course!), I'm not going to hype them up with that good old-fashioned "killer copy" only to have them ask for a refund the minute they receive it.

There's definitely a better way to approach copywriting in your online business. You can still be persuasive without going over the top.

If you're looking for:

  • Long-term, repeat customers

  • Salesmanship that establishes your credibility

  • The ability to sleep well at night

...you've come to the right place and I have something just for you, but you may wondering...

So Who The Heck Is Melissa Ingold
To Tell Me How To Write Copy?

I'm Just a Mom Who Found a Way to Make A Living While Copywriting from Home

I certainly don't want to bore you with a ton of details about myself, but you may want to know where I'm coming from and my experience online.

After my first child was born, I made the decision to become a stay at home mom. That same year I began writing and submitting articles to print magazines and was thrilled when my work was accepted, and a check would arrive in the mail for my efforts. Unfortunately, the wait time is incredibly long with traditional print publications, so it wasn’t long before I turned my attention to the Internet, where I quickly and steadily increased my income over the next few years.

I literally worked my way up from writing and submitting articles to traditional print magazines, to running a successful online copywriting business, to transition to a full-time Internet Marketer. After 8 years I now make more money working from my home office, working the hours I choose, than I ever did working a 9 to 5 job - and it's all thanks to copywriting!

My business thrived because my clients kept coming back - in fact one recently said:

"You know I still make sales from the sales letter even though the product is a 2007 edition. I generated over $8100 in sales with NO pay-per-click, NO article marketing, NO jv partners, NO banner ads, NO Offline ads, and NO press releases. Just good old-fashioned SEO and emailing my list. Your sales letter really hit the mark!

Tiffani Smith of Triple Threat Publishing

Though I no longer service clients, my passion for crafting sales letters and assisting others write great copy is still in force. My ultimate goal is to only share useful strategies and to provide helpful tools.

So, let's get back to how I can help with your copywriting. I'd love to share some of my own approaches to copywriting and give it all to you step-by-step, so you can start applying these strategies to your business starting today. 

After all, nobody knows your business better than you and you are the most qualified person to write your own copy. Even if you think you can't write...you might just turn yourself into a pro with the Copywriting Sweetie Training & Software Course.

Here's how to...

Learn How To Write Sales-Producing Copy,
Even If Don't Consider Yourself A Great Writer

You don't have to be a literary genius to sell your products online. If you know your products well, understand your target market (we'll help you with that) and can put a few sentences together, you have what it takes to develop your copywriting skills.

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If you're looking for a simple way to get more sales, here's just a small sampling of what you can learn:

  • How design is crucial to your website's sales (and that doesn't mean a beautiful site with all the bells and whistles)

  • How to write attention grabbing headlines that will pull your reader into the copy

  • How to clearly guide your readers to a “call to action” that gets results

  • How to write product descriptions that sell instead of the bland uninspiring descriptions found on many sites

  • How to keep your sales message consistent and not confuse your visitors with too many options

  • How to make your writing flow throughout your copy and make your readers eager for more

  • What you should include in testimonials to turn them into a powerful sales tool

  • The difference of how to write to get the sale and how to write to give something away

  • Why every sales page should include a P.S. – In fact, P.S. really should stand for "powerful sales" message.

  • You even receive step-by-step software to help you put your marketing messages together quickly and easily.

Let me tell you more about the course and software, but first, I thought you'd might like to hear from LaTara, who has already had a chance to listen to the training audio and opt-in builder software. She may be exaggerating on the "genius" part of it, but you get the point. ;-)

Photo of LaTara Ham-Ying"Melissa Ingold is a genius and has yet done it again. As I listened to the training audio I was once again reminded of something I needed to do. As a writer for over 25 years, I tend to think I know all about it. The Copywriting Sweetie training audio showed me the marketing behind the words.

I tried for over a year to understand opt-in pages but to no avail. When I found out about Melissa's opt-in builder I was excited because she is so resourceful. Learning how to use it was easy, simple, and very beneficial."

LaTara Ham-Ying
Chicago, IL
VeganFamilyLiving.com


Course Breakdown: Here's What's Included

So you know that you're making the right decision on signing up as a Copywriting Sweetie student, Ive detailed exactly what's included. The following 5 components can help you start selling more of your product...starting today:

Component #1: Training Guide

This step-by-step guide will take you through important terminology, how to make the most of your copy and practical exercises to apply to your existing or brand-new website.

Here's what you'll learn in this straight-to-the point 33-page copywriting guide:

Learn Internet Copywriting

  • Why learning copywriting will put you way ahead most of your competitors [pg. 4].

  • Why your target market might not be what you think it is and how you can use that information to make more sales [pg. 6].

  • Finally understanding what is unique about your business and sets you apart from your competitors [pg. 9].

  • Why the features of your product are extremely important, but aren't likely what will sell your product best [pg. 11].

  • The secret to writing effective bullet points that will make your potential customers eager to buy your product on the spot [pg. 13].

  • How to craft headlines that will keep your website visitor and your website and hungry to learn more [pg. 14].

  • Another kind of headline that will keep people reading all the way to your order link [pg. 17].

  • The important ingredients you need to include for highly-effective and believable testimonials [pg. 18].

  • The one thing that must be on every page of your website, but most website owners completely miss [pg. 20].

  • Tips to speaking directly to and truly connecting with your audience [pg. 24].

  • Why grammar isn't all that your high-school English teacher cracked it up to be [pg. 26].

  • How to set up your website for more sales [pg. 29].

  • Getting more of your visitors to buy now, instead of putting it off until later (and likely forgetting about you completely) [pg. 30].

Component #2: Training Audio & Transcripts

Learn Internet CopywritingListen to this 63-minute interview with Alice Seba (or read the transcripts for easy reference) as she give you the basics and beyond to start selling your products more effectively. In this interview you'll learn:
  • More on how this one-time copywriter for hire (me) realized that she could make more money by getting out of the business [1:15].

  • Why copywriting is not just "sales copy". Writing to sell goes way beyond that.  [1:45].

  • Why website traffic isn't THE answer to more sales [3:15].

  • The one important key to distinguishing yourself from the competition and why most of your competitors completely miss this [5:40]. Learn Internet Copywriting

  • Why competing based on price could mean disaster for your business [11:55].

  • Why limiting your product availability can mean more sales [13:12].

  • The most important part of every single web page you create. It doesn't matter if it's a home page, a sales letter, an article or an about us page. That page needs this [14:35].

  • Why selling and search engine optimization don't always mix, but what you can do to incorporate both to your various pages [18:20].

  • One of the best ways to find great headlines for your own products and website pages [21:48].

  • Why your website navigation, if you have it, is often completely irrelevant [27:35].

  • Discover that your visitors REALLY do like to be bossed around a little [28:45].

  • What to do with visitors that decide not to buy your product and possibly turn them into a customer before they click away from your website [30:00].

  • Setting yourself apart from the competition by illustrating how your product benefits your customers [38:00].

  • Why you simply are not important in the whole sales equation. Learn how to take the realization and sell a whole lot more to your prospects [38:50].

  • How eliminating or limiting these types of words in your sales copy can help boost your conversion rates [44:00].

  • Why you can fire your high-school English teacher and tell her that you're making more money now that you forgot just about everything she told you about proper grammar [47:42].

  • Simple steps to make sure more of your readers stick around to read what you have to say [52:00].

  • Why shopping cart/ multi-product websites will benefit from this copywriting advice [54:00].

  • When to use a sales letter instead of a shopping cart [56:48].


The training audio and transcripts will give you plenty of ideas to go start writing your own copy or fixing some of those glaring problems on your website right now. But if you need help getting your copy together on a web page here's some good news...

Component #3: Step-By-Step Easy-To-Use
Web Page Builder Software & Completely Illustrated Guide To Help You Reach Your Marketing Objectives

A while back, I created some website templates to help people set up 4 important components to any online business. The templates showed people how to set up:

  • An opt-in page: To increase your subscriber opt-in rates.

  • Sales letter page: To improve the conversion on selling one product at a time.

  • Survey Page: To conduct research about what your target market wants to learn.

  • Thank you page: To increase your profits even further

When I created these templates my customers ate them up and used them to sell their information products, mail-order products, to promote their ecourses and discover what ebooks they could offer in the future.

Here's a few random comments I received on the templates:

"Oh wow, thank you. This makes it much eaiser." - Jessica C.

"Yippie! Thanks!" - Regina Baker of Houston, Texas.


Lynette Chandler, Software Creator
Lynette Chandler

But it got better! After I sent these templates out, my long-time programmer Lynette Chandler emailed and said, "Would you like me to create some step-by-step software that will actually create these HTML pages?"

Of course, I enthusiastically said, "Yes please!"

The templates were simply HTML documents that people had to edit themselves in a web page editor and some web-building skills were required.

So, Lynette set out to create an easy-to-use software that takes you through each step of the page-building process.

With Melissa's instructions and her tech-savvy, I've made the process a near no-brainer. Interestingly enough, there are other similar pieces of software on the market that don't offer near the same functionality and sell for $97 and higher. I'm going to make sure things are much easier on your wallet and you (more on that a bit later)!

First, let's look at how it works: Just launch the software, choose which kind of page you'd like to create...

Copywriting Software Interface

System Requirements: Windows 2000, XP (sorry not Mac compatible)

Learn Internet Copywriting...and don't worry, there's a detailed illustrated guide to help you through the entire process that includes even more great copywriting advice along the way. This 66-page provides you with the solid understand of the purpose of each marketing page you create and how to make the most them.

Even the software is completely step-by-step and shows you exactly what to do as you go along. Have a look below:

 


Picture of How Copywriting Software Looks

...then easily insert your sign up code or shopping cart links and when you're done, the html page is produced for you:

Screenshot of Opt-in Page Example

All you need to do is load your page with your favorite FTP or publishing program.

Save your work in the software and you can come back over and over again to make changes and tweak your conversion rate.

Already Proficient with a  Web Page Editor? Templates Are Included!

If you're already comfortable working with HTML pages and you don't really need the software, I've thrown in all four templates. They're fully customizable and can be used in any web page editor.

No matter your level of experience, you can easily put your marketing pages together.

Here's a note from Angela Wills. It's her opt-in site that is shown right above here:

Angela Wills - Opt-In Builder User"Thank you so much for the Opt-in Page builder. As someone who didn't have a lot of experience or confidence with writing web copy the page builder made it so easy to get a great looking page up very quickly.

I just love how it leads you through all the steps you need to make a page that converts your visitors into subscribers (or customers) including choosing the fonts, colors, and adding the different elements like a header and testimonials.

This is a great builder for those who are new to doing these types of pages but also for those who are experienced and want something done up quickly. Thanks again!"

- Angela Wills
Baldwin, Ontario Canada
StarVA.com


And once you have your pages set up you'll want to know exactly how to make the most of your copy...

Component #4: Critique Videos To Learn From & Avoid The Mistakes Of Others

I've included four website critiques for you to learn from.  You'll be able to view full video critiques online and I've also thrown in the accompanying written reviews - watch the video, read the review or do both, it's great to learn from and also avoid the mistakes others are making.

Now that's not a dig at any of the very brave website owners who came forward for a critique...I think it's important that website owners do share and learn from each other and we really appreciate the opportunity to share the sites with you.

Prefer to Read Rather Than Watch Videos?

completely understand. Some people learn better by watching, some by reading and others by doing both. Or perhaps, you don't have an Internet connection that allows for easy video viewing. That's why I've included written summaries of each critiques, so you can get the best of both worlds and maximizing your copywriting education.

Here's just a quick summary of the video critiques:


Opt-in Page Critique

Opt-In Page Critique

Watch this critique of an opt-in page that will show you how to:

  • Keep a clear purpose in your opt-in page and avoid the common mistake of mixed messages.

  • Ensure your readers know what to do when they reach your opt-in page. It seems silly, but you'd be surprised at how much a little extra help can improve your opt-in rate.

  • Improve your headline to keep a reader's attention and get them to the sign-up box.


Survey Page Critique

Survey Page Critique

Get valuable information from your target market by watching this critique that will show you how to:

  • Avoid the common mistake with survey pages that will reduce your responses dramatically. You can see the mistake in the image on the left...can you spot it?

  • How just clarifying this one thing on your survey page form can dramatically increase your response rate.


Sales Page Critique

Sales Letter Critique

Acquire the knowledge you need to sell more with your sales letter by watching this critique:

  • How to increase conversion rates by tweaking your your headline

  • How to draw them in and get them to keep reading

  • Where to place your order links. Put them in too soon and you might lose your potential customer.

  • Using stories to create trust and credibility.


Shopping Cart Site Critique

There's more to selling products than just throwing a few graphics onto a page and hoping for the best.  If you have a shopping cart, this critique will help you learn how:

  • To utilize your web space to it’s full potential and why design is important and what mistakes you should avoid.
  • Why so many shopping carts forget to tell their visitor WHAT to do.

  • Why offering fewer products may increase your sales.

Component #5: 21 Common Copy Mistakes

Learn Internet CopywritingI've also included a useful quick downloadable guide that highlights 21 common mistakes made in copywriting and how you can can avoid them.

If you want to make your visitors stay at your website longer and to say yes to your products more frequently, this quick guide is for you.

Join me as a Copywriting Sweetie and you'll be armed with the education, tools and experience to sell more with your sales copy. If you're not quite sure if you should take the plunge, allow me to tell you this...



When You Check Out The Course & Software, As Always, You Are Automatically Backed By The 30-Day "Sweetie" Money-Back Guarantee


I never want you to worry about purchasing a product from me. I always take care to deliver the best information and put it into an easy-to-follow system -- but I want you know this...

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Grab your spot for the low price of $47.00. Try to buy software like this anywhere else and you'll be paying nearly $100 or more. :-( By securing your download now you'll receive the low, low price PLUS all the copywriting training you need to get started.


Yes! Melissa, I'm Ready To Start Writing "Sweetie" Copy That Gets Results.


Provide me with instant access to your Copywriting Sweetie Training & Software Course, so I can start creating my own attention-grabbing sales copy. I understand this course includes instant online access to:

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  • 63-minute training audio and transcript that teaches you everything you need to create copy that sells.

  • Easy to use web page building software to help you quickly create your sales pages.

  • Fully-Customizable Bonus Templates if you would rather use your own web page building software.

  • Accompanying illustrated to guide with extra copywriting guidance to help you use the software step-by-step

  • Copywriting Critique Videos to help you learn from and avoid the mistakes of others

  • 21 Common Copy Mistakes guide.

I understand that if I order today, I can take advantage of the incredible price of $47.00 and I'll be able to access everything instantly.

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Learning copywriting may, at first, sound overwhelming or daunting.  The Copywriting Sweetie Software and Training Course was made with this in mind. I'll give you all the tools you need to easily start writing effective copy... but it's up to you to apply those skills. I can't wait to get started!

All the best,

Melissa Ingold
Your Partner in Online Success

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