"Imagine!
There IS
A Way to Have More Satisfied,
Repeat Customers Who Keep Coming
Back for More...Without
Selling Your Soul to the Devil"
Keep Reading to Find Out
How to Sell More
to Your Visitors The First Time They Visit
From:Melissa Ingold
Date:
Subject:Get
Them to Buy...without the Hype
Dear
Fellow Online
Business Owner,
Whether
you've been online for one month or 10 years, the words on your website
are the one crucial
element which can make or
break your business.
That important element
is communication.
Think about it for a
minute, offline sales people train hard and work for years to improve
and tweak their communication skills. They take training
courses, attend seminars, and practice, practice,
practice. They also have an advantage to selling that we
online business owners don't have. They use their body
language and gestures to gain your full attention and can speak
directly
to you.
I don't know about you,
but personally I'm
too shy and not pushy enough
to make it in the cut-throat offline sales industry. I
started my online business to find an easier way to sell.I
thought there must be a way to reach an unlimited number of people
without having to cold call or hunt leads down.
And thankfully I was
right. Online
customers will come
to YOU. Forget
harassing people who really don't want to speak to
you. Imagine people coming to you to learn more about YOUR
products. Customers who are...
Eager
to hear about you, your services, your business and all you have to
offer.
Excited to see your next
product launch and are ready to buy.
Willing
to give you their email address so you can give your product
recommendations.
Happy
to give you repeat business and unexpected praise and feedback.
There's just one
problem, if your website isn't communicating effectively with your
visitor - you lose a potential subscriber or worse yet, a potential
customer. You aren't there to personally greet your website visitors,
so your website MUST communicate effectively.
Using
the right words on your web page - also known as copywriting - can help
you get more subscribers and customers.
And you can do this, all without resorting to hype or other unsavory
tactics rampant on the web.
For example...
What About This
"Killer Copy" That Lets You Sell Anything
To Anyone?
We Say: There's No
Need To Resort To Murder Just To Get Your Visitors To Click The Order
Button!
In
reading about
copywriting, you may have learned about something called, "Killer
Copy". The idea behind killer copy is that you can sell anything to
anyone. You know, the old saying about being able to "sell ice to an
eskimo"?
Sorry, I'm
not much into being a "killer" with my copy or selling things to people
that they don't need. I'd
rather educate my customers to help them make the best purchasing
decisions. If my
productsare
not what they need, I
don't want them to buy it. PERIOD. If my
products are crap (and they're not, of course!), I'm
not going to hype them up with that good old-fashioned "killer copy"
only to have them ask for a refund the minute they receive it.
There's
definitely a
better way to approach copywriting in your online business. You can
still be persuasive without going over the top.
If
you're looking for:
Long-term,
repeat
customers
Salesmanship
that
establishes your credibility
The
ability to sleep
well at night
...you've
come to the
right place and I
have something just for you, but you may wondering...
So Who The Heck Is Melissa Ingold
To Tell Me How To Write Copy?
I'm
Just a Mom Who Found a Way to Make A Living While Copywriting from
Home
I certainly
don't
want to bore you with a ton of details about myself, but you may
want to know where I'm coming from and my
experience online.
After
my first child was born, I made the decision to become a stay
at home mom. That same year I began writing and submitting
articles to print magazines and was thrilled when my work was
accepted, and a check would arrive in the mail for my efforts.
Unfortunately, the wait time is incredibly long with traditional print
publications, so it wasn’t long before I turned my
attention to the Internet, where I quickly and steadily
increased my income over the next few years.
I literally
worked my way up from writing and submitting articles to traditional
print magazines, to running a successful online copywriting business,
to transition to a full-time Internet Marketer. After 8
years I now make more money working from my home
office, working the hours I choose, than I ever
did working a 9 to 5 job - and it's all
thanks to copywriting!
My business
thrived because my clients kept coming back - in fact one
recently said:
"You know I still
make sales from the sales letter
even though the product is a 2007
edition. I generated
over $8100 in sales with NO
pay-per-click, NO
article marketing, NO jv partners, NO banner ads, NO Offline ads, and
NO press releases. Just good old-fashioned SEO and emailing my list. Your sales
letter really
hit the mark!
- Tiffani
Smith of Triple Threat Publishing
Though
I no longer service
clients, my passion for crafting sales
letters and assisting others write great copy is still in force. My ultimate goal is to only share
useful strategies and to provide helpful tools.
So, let's get
back to
how I
can help with your copywriting. I'd
love to share some of my own approaches to copywriting and give it all
to you step-by-step, so you can start applying these strategies to your
business starting today.
After all, nobody
knows your business better than you and you are the most qualified
person to write your own copy. Even if you think you can't write...you
might just turn yourself into a pro with the
Copywriting Sweetie Training & Software Course.
Here's how
to...
Learn
How To Write Sales-Producing
Copy,
Even If Don't Consider Yourself A Great Writer
You don't
have to be a
literary genius to sell your products online. If you know your products
well, understand your target market (we'll
help you with that) and can put a few sentences together, you have what
it takes to develop your copywriting skills.
If
you're looking for a simple way to get more sales, here's just a small
sampling of what you can learn:
How
design is crucial
to your website's sales (and that doesn't mean a beautiful site with
all the bells and whistles)
How to write attention grabbing
headlines that will pull your reader into the copy
How to clearly guide your readers to a
“call to action” that gets results
How to write product descriptions that
sell instead of the bland uninspiring descriptions found on many sites
How to keep your sales message
consistent and not confuse your visitors with too many options
How to make your writing flow throughout
your copy and make your readers eager for more
What you should include in testimonials
to turn them into a powerful sales tool
The difference of how to write to get
the sale and how to write to give something away
Why every sales page should include a
P.S. – In fact, P.S. really should stand for "powerful sales"
message.
You even receive
step-by-step software to help you put your marketing messages together
quickly and easily.
Let me tell you more
about the course and software, but first, I thought you'd might
like to hear from LaTara, who has already had a chance to listen to the
training audio and opt-in builder software. She may be exaggerating on
the "genius" part of it, but you get the point. ;-)
"Melissa
Ingold is a genius and has yet done it again. As I listened to the
training audio I was once again reminded of something I needed to do. As a writer for over 25
years, I tend to think I know
all about it. The Copywriting Sweetie training audio showed me the marketing
behind the words.
I tried for over a year to understand opt-in
pages but to no avail. When I found out about Melissa's opt-in builder
I
was excited because she is so resourceful. Learning how to use it was
easy, simple, and very beneficial."
- LaTara
Ham-Ying Chicago, IL VeganFamilyLiving.com
Course Breakdown: Here's What's Included
So you know
that
you're making the right decision on signing up as a Copywriting Sweetie
student, Ive
detailed exactly what's included. The following 5 components can help
you start selling more of your product...starting today:
Component #1: Training
Guide
This
step-by-step
guide will take you through important terminology, how to make the most
of your copy and practical
exercises to apply to your existing or
brand-new website.
Here's what
you'll
learn in this straight-to-the point 33-page copywriting guide:
Why
learning
copywriting will put you way ahead most of your competitors [pg. 4].
Why
your target market might not be what you think it is and how you can
use that information to make more sales
[pg. 6].
Finally
understanding
what is unique about your business and sets you apart from your
competitors [pg. 9].
Why
the features of your product are extremely important, but aren't likely
what will sell your product best
[pg. 11].
The
secret to writing
effective bullet points that will make your potential customers eager
to buy your product on the spot [pg. 13].
How
to craft headlines
that will keep your website visitor and your website and hungry to
learn more [pg. 14].
Another
kind of
headline that will keep people reading all the way to your order link
[pg. 17].
The
important
ingredients you need to include for highly-effective and believable
testimonials [pg. 18].
The one
thing that
must be on every page of your website, but most website owners
completely miss [pg. 20].
Tips
to speaking directly to and truly connecting with your audience
[pg. 24].
Why
grammar isn't all
that
your high-school English teacher cracked it up to be[pg.
26].
How
to set up your website for more sales [pg.
29].
Getting
more of your
visitors to buy now, instead of putting it off until later (and likely
forgetting about you completely) [pg. 30].
Component #2: Training
Audio & Transcripts
Listen
to this 63-minute
interview with Alice Seba (or
read the transcripts for easy reference) as she give you the basics and
beyond to start selling your products more effectively. In this
interview you'll learn:
More on
how this
one-time copywriter for hire (me) realized that she could make more
money by getting out of the business [1:15].
Why
copywriting is not
just "sales copy". Writing to sell goes way beyond that. [1:45].
Why
website traffic
isn't THE answer to more sales [3:15].
The
one important key
to distinguishing yourself from the competition and why most of your
competitors completely miss this [5:40].
Why
competing based on
price could mean disaster for your business [11:55].
Why
limiting your
product availability can mean more sales [13:12].
The most
important
part of every single web page you create. It doesn't matter if it's a
home page, a sales letter, an article or an about us page. That page
needs this [14:35].
Why
selling and search
engine optimization don't always mix, but what you can do to
incorporate both to your various pages [18:20].
One of
the best ways
to find great headlines for your own products and website pages
[21:48].
Why
your website
navigation, if you have it, is often completely irrelevant [27:35].
Discover
that your
visitors REALLY do like to be bossed around a little [28:45].
What to
do with
visitors that decide not to buy your product and possibly turn them
into a customer before they click away from your website [30:00].
Setting
yourself apart
from the competition by illustrating how your product benefits your
customers [38:00].
Why you
simply are not
important in the whole sales equation. Learn how to take the
realization and sell a whole lot more to your prospects [38:50].
How
eliminating or
limiting these types of words in your sales copy can help boost your
conversion rates [44:00].
Why you
can fire your
high-school English teacher and tell her that you're making more money
now that you forgot just about everything she told you about proper
grammar [47:42].
Simple
steps to make
sure more of your readers stick around to read what you have to say [52:00].
Why
shopping cart/
multi-product websites will benefit from this copywriting advice
[54:00].
When
to use a sales
letter instead of a shopping cart [56:48].
The training audio and
transcripts will give you plenty of ideas to go start writing your own
copy or fixing some of those glaring problems on your website right
now. But if you need help getting your copy together on a web page
here's some good news...
Component #3:
Step-By-Step Easy-To-Use
Web Page Builder Software & Completely
Illustrated Guide To Help You Reach Your Marketing Objectives
A while back,
I
created some website templates to help people set up 4 important
components to any online business. The templates showed
people how to set up:
An
opt-in page: To increase
your subscriber opt-in rates.
Sales
letter page: To improve the
conversion on selling one product at a time.
Survey
Page: To conduct research
about what your target market wants to learn.
Thank
you page: To increase your
profits even further
When I created these templates my customers ate them
up and used them to sell
their information products, mail-order products, to promote their
ecourses and discover what ebooks they could offer in the future.
Here's a few
random
comments I
received on the templates:
"Oh wow,
thank you. This makes it much eaiser." - Jessica C.
"Yippie!
Thanks!"
- Regina Baker of Houston, Texas.
Lynette Chandler
But it
got better!
After I
sent these templates out, my
long-time programmer Lynette Chandler emailed and
said, "Would you like me
to create some step-by-step software that will actually create these
HTML pages?"
Of
course, I
enthusiastically said, "Yes please!"
The templates
were
simply HTML documents that people had to edit themselves in a web page
editor and some web-building skills were required.
So, Lynette
set out to
create an easy-to-use
software that takes you through each step of the page-building process.
With Melissa's
instructions and her tech-savvy, I've made the process a near
no-brainer. Interestingly enough, there are other similar pieces of
software on the market that don't offer near the same functionality and
sell for $97 and higher. I'm
going to make sure things are much easier on your wallet and you (more
on that a bit later)!
First,
let's look at how it works: Just
launch the software, choose which kind of page you'd like to create...
System
Requirements: Windows 2000,
XP (sorry not Mac compatible)
...and
don't worry, there's a detailed
illustrated guide
to help you through the entire process that includes even more great
copywriting advice along the way. This 66-page provides you with the
solid understand of the purpose of each marketing page you create and
how to make the most them.
Even the
software is
completely step-by-step and shows you exactly what to do as you go
along. Have a look below:
...then
easily insert
your sign up code or shopping cart links and when you're done, the html
page is produced for you:
All you need
to do is
load your page with your favorite FTP or publishing program.
Save your
work in the
software and you can come back over and over again to make changes and
tweak your conversion rate.
Already
Proficient with a Web
Page Editor? Templates Are Included!
If you're
already
comfortable working with HTML pages and you don't really need the
software, I've thrown in all four templates. They're fully customizable
and can be used in any web page editor.
No
matter your level of experience,
you can easily put your marketing pages together.
Here's
a note from Angela Wills.
It's her opt-in site that is shown right above here:
"Thank
you so much
for the Opt-in Page builder. As someone who didn't have a lot of
experience or confidence with writing web copy the page builder made it so easy
to get a great looking page up very quickly.
I
just love how it leads you through
all
the steps you need to make a
page that converts your visitors into subscribers (or customers)
including choosing the fonts, colors, and adding the different elements
like a header and testimonials.
This
is a great
builder for those who are new to
doing these types
of pages but also for those
who are experienced and want something done up quickly. Thanks again!"
- Angela
Wills
Baldwin, Ontario Canada
StarVA.com
And once you have your
pages set up you'll want to know exactly how to make the most of your
copy...
Component #4: Critique
Videos To Learn From & Avoid The Mistakes Of Others
I've included
four
website critiques for you to learn from. You'll be able to
view full video critiques online and I've also thrown in the
accompanying written reviews - watch the video, read the review or do
both, it's great to learn
from and also avoid the mistakes others are making.
Now that's
not a dig
at any of the very brave website owners who came forward for a
critique...I
think it's important that website owners do share and learn from each
other and
we really appreciate the
opportunity to share the sites with you.
Prefer to Read
Rather Than Watch Videos?
I completely
understand.
Some people learn better by watching, some by reading and others by
doing both. Or perhaps, you don't have an Internet connection that
allows for easy video viewing. That's why I've
included written summaries of each critiques,
so you can get the best of both worlds and maximizing your copywriting
education.
Here's just a
quick
summary of the video critiques:
Opt-in
Page
Critique
Watch thiscritique of
an opt-in page that will show you how to:
Keep a clear
purpose in your opt-in page
and avoid the common mistake of mixed messages.
Ensure
your readers know what to do
when they reach your opt-in page. It seems silly, but you'd be
surprised at how much a little extra help can improve your opt-in rate.
Improve your headline
to keep a reader's attention and get them to the sign-up box.
Survey Page Critique
Get
valuable
information from your target market by watching this critique that will
show you how to:
Avoid
the common
mistake with survey pages that will reduce your responses dramatically.
You
can see the mistake in the image on the left...can you spot it?
How just
clarifying this one thing
on your survey page form can dramatically increase your response rate.
Sales Page
Critique
Acquire
the knowledge
you need to sell more with your sales letter by watching this critique:
How to increase
conversion rates by tweaking
your your headline
How to draw them in
and get them to keep
reading
Where to place your
order links. Put them in too soon and you might lose your potential
customer.
Using stories to create
trust and credibility.
Shopping Cart
Site Critique
There's
more to selling products than just throwing a few graphics onto a page
and hoping for the best. If you have a shopping cart, this
critique will help you learn how:
To
utilize your web
space to it’s full potential and why design
is important and what
mistakes you should avoid.
Why so many shopping
carts forget to tell their visitor WHAT to do.
Why offering fewer
products may increase your sales.
Component #5: 21
Common Copy Mistakes
I've also included a
useful quick downloadable guide that highlights 21 common mistakes made
in copywriting and how you can can avoid them.
If you want
to make
your visitors stay at your website longer and to say yes to your
products more frequently, this quick guide is for you.
Join me
as a Copywriting Sweetie and you'll be armed with the education, tools
and experience to sell more with your sales copy. If you're not quite
sure if you should take the plunge, allow me
to tell you this...
When You Check Out The
Course & Software, As Always, You Are Automatically Backed By
The 30-Day "Sweetie" Money-Back Guarantee
I never want you
to
worry about purchasing a product from me. I
always take care to deliver the best information and put it into an
easy-to-follow system -- but I
want you know this...
Grab your spot for the low
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of $47.00. Try to buy software like this anywhere else and
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you'll receive the low, low price PLUS all the copywriting training you
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Gets Results.
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I can start creating my own attention-grabbing sales copy. I understand
this course includes instant online access to:
63-minute training
audio and transcript that teaches you everything you need to create
copy that sells.
Easy to use web
page
building software to help you quickly create your sales pages.
Fully-Customizable
Bonus Templates if you would rather use your own web page building
software.
Accompanying
illustrated to guide with extra copywriting guidance to help you use
the software step-by-step
Copywriting Critique
Videos to help you learn from and avoid the mistakes of others
21
Common Copy Mistakes guide.
I understand that if
I order today, I can take
advantage of the incredible price of $47.00and
I'll be able to access everything instantly.
...or if you already
have an Internet Marketing Sweetie account, click here
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Learning
copywriting
may, at first, sound overwhelming or daunting. The
Copywriting Sweetie Software and Training Course was made with this in
mind. I'll
give you all the tools you need to easily start writing effective
copy... but it's up to you to apply those skills. I
can't wait to get started!
All the best,
Melissa Ingold
Your Partner
in Online Success
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